I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Graeme. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Project team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
I like your slideshow on being safe online with what photos and pictures we post. The first slide works great as an interesting title that caught my attention straight away. The thinking emoji is a great way to sum up the message. Then you give really good points on easy ways we can more safe online. Nice work!
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Hey Nese,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Project team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
I like your slideshow on being safe online with what photos and pictures we post. The first slide works great as an interesting title that caught my attention straight away. The thinking emoji is a great way to sum up the message. Then you give really good points on easy ways we can more safe online. Nice work!
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel
Sure I will do that
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