I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Graeme. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Nese, thank you for sharing this on your blog. I like how you have put your chosen words in bold so that they stand out. One other thing you could do is add the link for the article that you found these words in. Ka pai, good work!
Mauri Nese, Good job on being active and sharing your work on your blog. I liked that you added pictures related to what you're talking about. I like the word "Geothermal" because it sounds very scientific and interesting. Today I gained a knowlege because of you. But maybe your font should be white so people can see it better but it depends on what colour background your going to do. Keep up with the great work. -Ema From EHS Your Class
Great job on working hard with your DLO ( Digital Learning Object ). I like how you have added pictures showing what the words mean and how it looks like. Great job Nese, keep up the great work!
Hi my name is Diaz and I go to Ahipara school. Great job on your DLO about describing the meaning of words and adding picture to go with them. Next time you could add some more detail. Keep up the good work Nese!
Kia ora Nese, thank you for sharing this on your blog. I like how you have put your chosen words in bold so that they stand out. One other thing you could do is add the link for the article that you found these words in. Ka pai, good work!
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ReplyDeleteGood job on being active and sharing your work on your blog. I liked that you added pictures related to what you're talking about. I like the word "Geothermal" because it sounds very scientific and interesting. Today I gained a knowlege because of you.
But maybe your font should be white so people can see it better but it depends on what colour background your going to do. Keep up with the great work.
-Ema From EHS Your Class
Kia Orana Nese,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on working hard with your DLO ( Digital Learning Object ). I like how you have added pictures showing what the words mean and how it looks like. Great job Nese, keep up the great work!
Hi my name is Diaz and I go to Ahipara school. Great job on your DLO about describing the meaning of words and adding picture to go with them. Next time you could add some more detail. Keep up the good work Nese!
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