I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Graeme. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Nese This is Joshua and all i want to say is that your poem is one of the best poems I have read yet. I like your poem because when I read it it made me fell like I was actually in Space Keep up the great work.
Nice job completing this SLJ activity. You've got some really nice rhyming here. I really like the imagery of the rock that was hidden and locked. Because I think it could mean that the moon is locked like people couldn't go there until they succeeded with the first step on the moon. The picture is really nice to and the background olour matchs nicely. Great work Nese, keep it up.
Hi Nese
ReplyDeleteThis is Joshua and all i want to say is that your poem is one of the best poems I have read yet. I like your poem because when I read it it made me fell like I was actually in Space Keep up the great work.
Hey Nese,
ReplyDeleteNice job completing this SLJ activity. You've got some really nice rhyming here. I really like the imagery of the rock that was hidden and locked. Because I think it could mean that the moon is locked like people couldn't go there until they succeeded with the first step on the moon. The picture is really nice to and the background olour matchs nicely. Great work Nese, keep it up.
See you in the comments.
Daniel :D