I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Graeme. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Awesome to hear about your family and where it comes from. Can I just say that Kiribati has an awesome flag, really cool of you to include it here. It's super cool to learn more about Kiribati from you. Could you teach me how you would say hello in Kiribati? It'd be really cool to comment on your post with a traditional greeting.
Really cool to see you've used pictures to make your post look really cool, Quick side note, please try to attribute your images by adding a link or writing where you got any pictures you grab off the internet. For an example, have a look at how the SLJ team have done this around each image on the activities page. This won't cost you points, but it is really good internet practice for the future.
Looking forward to seeing more, I'll see you in the comments. Daniel :)
Aha, I see your eyes are on the prize, your post was already awesome and got the points. The suggestion to attribute your images is not a major one at all it is just something you will have to start doing later in high school, so it's good to practice now. Keep up the good work.
Hey Nese,
ReplyDeleteAwesome to hear about your family and where it comes from. Can I just say that Kiribati has an awesome flag, really cool of you to include it here. It's super cool to learn more about Kiribati from you. Could you teach me how you would say hello in Kiribati? It'd be really cool to comment on your post with a traditional greeting.
Really cool to see you've used pictures to make your post look really cool, Quick side note, please try to attribute your images by adding a link or writing where you got any pictures you grab off the internet. For an example, have a look at how the SLJ team have done this around each image on the activities page. This won't cost you points, but it is really good internet practice for the future.
Looking forward to seeing more, I'll see you in the comments.
Daniel :)
is this better and the Kiribati word for Hello is would I get points now?
DeleteMauri Nese,
DeleteAha, I see your eyes are on the prize, your post was already awesome and got the points. The suggestion to attribute your images is not a major one at all it is just something you will have to start doing later in high school, so it's good to practice now. Keep up the good work.
Daniel
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