I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Graeme. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nese, I am so proud of you for this persuasive writing that you have completed. The structure is very clear and you have used your persuasive techniques. This is definitely going up on the wall when we can go back to class! Mīharo, amazing work.
Nese, I am so proud of you for this persuasive writing that you have completed. The structure is very clear and you have used your persuasive techniques. This is definitely going up on the wall when we can go back to class! Mīharo, amazing work.
ReplyDeletehi Nese its me Gunveen. i like your opinion about dogs and it is really good.
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