I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Graeme. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Nese Its Daz from Ahipara School. I don´t really understand what you were doing on your task Inside Earth. Maybe add a little more detail. Talk about what you did. Keep up the good work! kia mau ki to mahi pai.
Great job on this blog post. I like how you made this blog post bright. Maybe next time you can add a caption of what you are doing but anyway great job.
Hi Nese my name is Dakota from Ahipara School. I like your blog about "Inside the earth". Next time maybe you could do more writing and write why you did this activity. Keep up the great work!
Kia ora Nese Its Daz from Ahipara School. I don´t really understand what you were doing on your task Inside Earth. Maybe add a little more detail. Talk about what you did. Keep up the good work! kia mau ki to mahi pai.
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ReplyDeleteIt's me Shriya from your class rm11,
Great job on this blog post. I like how you made this blog post bright. Maybe next time you can add a caption of what you are doing but anyway great job.
Hi Nese my name is Dakota from Ahipara School. I like your blog about "Inside the earth". Next time maybe you could do more writing and write why you did this activity. Keep up the great work!
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