I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Graeme. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Nese this is Aysha from your class I really enjoyed reading your story I liked it. I really liked reading this i loved all of it. I have no questions but it was cool bye.
Tena koe Nese this is Ellakaye here, I really enjoyed this interesting story of yours. It has good punctuation in it and all your paragraphs are organized. Keep up the great work Nese!
Kia ora Nese this is Aysha from your class I really enjoyed reading your story I liked it. I really liked reading this i loved all of it. I have no questions but it was cool bye.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aysha, this is Nese from your old school. Thank you for commenting on my post! Reply to you next time!
DeleteTena koe Nese this is Ellakaye here, I really enjoyed this interesting story of yours. It has good punctuation in it and all your paragraphs are organized. Keep up the great work Nese!
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