I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Graeme. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
In today's activity we had to pick one comment that was caring and helpful and I picked Fiona's because she had some good ideas in mind that I should to make my te reo maori better.
It’s Shannon here again, from the Summer Learning Journey.
I was really impressed with your kind comment back to Fiona. You started with a lovely greeting and answered Fiona’s questions in your comment. I also really like how you finished your comment respectfully. You were very thoughtful in your response!
Maybe you could consider continuing the thread for others who comment on your blog? It’ll get you bonus points in the SLJ too if you use the link! Keep up the incredible work!
Kia ora Nese
ReplyDeleteIt’s Shannon here again, from the Summer Learning Journey.
I was really impressed with your kind comment back to Fiona. You started with a lovely greeting and answered Fiona’s questions in your comment. I also really like how you finished your comment respectfully. You were very thoughtful in your response!
Maybe you could consider continuing the thread for others who comment on your blog? It’ll get you bonus points in the SLJ too if you use the link! Keep up the incredible work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)